Commission - Mylea-Summer

So, I noticed that you had indeed fixed her arms, to give it more implied trajectory. The background is fantastic, with deep green in the grass and leaves to show summer. Her anatomy is also correct, everything is where it ought to be and is of the right proportion, and she sits so naturally. You did an awesome job on texture; her hair looks silky smooth, her clothes look to be made of loose fitting cotton, and the grass appears....grass-like. (I don't know how to better phrase that)
Things that could be need (slight) improvement:
1. Her arms - I know you fixed it, but they still don't seem quite right. I would suggest that the arm to our left be angled more towards the ground, so that it doesn't seem like it its cropped off by that flower. Also, the same forearm is a little bit too large for the shown back arm.
2. Her nipples - From what is shown, I have three different conclusions for why I can see the protrusions of her nipples through her shirt. 1, She is very sexually aroused, which, given her pose and facial expression, I do not think is the case. 2, She has very tight fitting clothes, which seeing how her sleeves are draping off her arms, I also don't think is the case. 3, She must be really cold, I don't think this is the reason, because it is supposed to be in the summer, and her clothes do not look to be wet, and there is nothing to really imply that she is cold. One suggestion would to be to not really show the nipple protrusion, or, if they HAVE to be shown, maybe reduce them in size.
Other than these two nit picks, this picture is great! (I only wish there was a second zoom in, so I could better see her pretty face) I think that because there is more background than person, this really adds a lot to the picture aesthetically.
Ratings:
Four stars for Vision, because you did great with the background and the girl, but the nitpicks slightly detract from the picture.
Five stars for Originality, because this is someone's OC, and you don't really get more original than "original character".
Four Stars for Technique, because you have clearly shown near mastery of being able to make a great figure and a very detailed background, yet the thing with her arm won't let me give you five stars...Sorry.
Five Stars for Impact, because I only critique pictures that mean a lot to me, and this certainly fits that description. You have made a very lovely picture of a very lovely lass, and I thank you for sharing this with us here on Deviant Art.